Before you take down that Christmas tree (it’s not July yet!), crack one more yuletide tale open. We’ve got an advance copy of Eerie Christmas 3 by Black Hare Press and I was able to sit down with author Daphne Fauber to discuss their story, ‘The Ballerina’. This review is two parts–Part 1 the story of The Ballerina and Part 2 the overall feel of the Eerie Christmas 3 anthology.
The Ballerina: Get them nuts a crackin’
Full Disclosure: Although Daphne is a writer for this site, my review is independent and there’s nothing in trade, etc.
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One of the perks of owning a horror business is that you can meet cool people in horror. Daphne is one of the most talented new writers I have seen in a long time. Rarely do we find someone who is both a product of their generation and able to navigate their artistic world through that lens–yet not being controlled by that lens.
Prose can be important and a clean, crisp copy is something readers can immediately get into. Daphne’s writing is not quite minimalist but it is crisp. If you’ve read Ray Carver before and seen what Lish did to his writing (a great before/after snapshot is found in Beginners), then you’ll have the measure of Daphne’s prose–not Lish minimalistic and not Carver’s original style, but the happy medium. It gets to the point. It is what Bruce Lee would call ‘Economy in motion’.
Not only does her writing push the story without the weight of ‘extra’, but she hits the crowd running (oh, Van Halen drop!) from the first line.
“Tiny pointe shoes danced across the floorboards, each step met with the plink of ceramic against wood.”
Daphne Fauber, The Ballerina. Eerie Christmas 3
The setting comes at us with intentful action. You can see this happening with little effort of the imagination. The start of the story comes on like the opening of the Nutcracker. We see a (mostly) unnamed character. We know them only as The Ballerina. The removing of the name, much like Joyce did in Counterparts, signifies the reduction of personhood. Unlike Counterparts, however, the removing of the name here isn’t done out of shame, but rather part of the plot. There is a reason why things are happening in this house and the exploration of family, bonds, and love in the face of courage are put to the test.
When reading this, I kept coming back to the imagery in the story. It sparked memories of my childhood cartoon movies (remember, Gen X cartoon movies were a lot darker than what we see today–we killed Bambi’s mom). Without spoiling the story (sincerely, go buy the anthology and find out for yourself–this story is well worth the price of admission), I can say that there is a lyricism in Daphne’s writing that makes you connect with memory. The sensory details, along with the rhythm, bring the writing to life. There are parts of this story where I was both imagining what the Ballerina looked like and she braved the darkness of the ______ (shhh spoilers!) and how each move would look on screen.
Story wise, Daphne’s writing moves like the Ballerina. It’s light, quick, and pointe toed. The plot dances on a string and slows where it needs to only to find itself spinning (no pun) once more with a change of beat.
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Character development can be (sometimes) difficult for a short story. I know writers who can’t even get a character from the car door to the front door in three pages. Daphne’s character work matches her plot n prose work. You get to know the character bit by bit and not through a exposition or inner monologue but with action. We see who this Ballerina is from the start, and by the end we are not only cheering for her, but wanting to see more.
In the end, The Ballerina by Daphne Fauber is a touching piece of holiday warmth. If you are from Gen X or like your Christmas tales with a bit of punch (or stab), then you really need to check out The Ballerina. It hits the sweet spot between endearing and engaging.
(5 / 5)
Eerie Christmas 3
Horror anthologies have a special spot in my heart. I mean, we’ve published an anthology (almost) every year for about a decade. It’s kinda our jam. I have to say I love the cover of this anthology and the way they did the interiors. It is a well-edited collection of some great horror stories. The pricing is just right and, it’s a great way to support indy books and indy horror at the same time.
I read the anthology on my kindle white and my Apple Books app (iPad). The iPad version looks better because parts are in color but the black and white with Kindle still works. There was something slightly askew with Kindle White and names (my version at least) that made me need to hit the TOC a bit more than I wanted, but, overall, the reading was an enjoyable experience.
I look forward to more Eerie Christmas anthologies and I hope everyone supports them so there are more anthologies to come :).
(4 / 5)
Where to get Eerie Christmas 3 and The Ballerina (sponsor links)
Part detective story, part meditation on death and the grim reaper, Ushers is Joe Hill’s latest release and second stand-alone short story in as many years. Released in November 2024, this thirty-page tale delves into the eerie realm of near-death experiences, exploring the blurred lines between life and death and the haunting aftermath of miraculous escapes.
The Plot.
Ushers is divided into two interviews. In the first, we meet with special agents John Oates and Daryl Duvall. The two interview a young man, Martin Lorensen, who seems to be one lucky kid. You see Martin has avoided death not once, but twice. The derailment of Mohawk 118 is central to their investigation; Martin had a ticket but didn’t get on the train. The other was a school shooting at Kennedy High School; Martin didn’t attend school that day. The special agents question whether this luck is culpability. Is Martin responsible for these events and the lives that were lost? Martin says no, but it is soon revealed that he knows a little more than he is letting on.
Highlights.
Joe Hill knows his way around a short story. His pacing and timing are second to none. There wasn’t a moment during Ushers that I wasn’t captivated by what was unfolding. This is not the first time that Hill has dealt with themes of death. We’ve met Ig Perrish in Horns and Judas Coyne in Heart-Shaped Box just to name two. This is though the first time that Hill has considered the inevitability of death and he has handled this weighty theme so beautifully. One of the quotes I pulled from this short story is going to stay with me for a long time. “Be a mammal. Eat as much fresh fruit as you can. Send some time in the trees. Hug the people you love. Accept that death is as natural as the rest of life.” (Hill, Ushers) Good advice for us all.
Drawbacks.
I’m a stickler for playing by the rules and weighing up the good and bad of everything. But I’m going against my greater instincts here and telling you there were no drawbacks in this short story. Haters come at me, but I can’t find anything to complain about.
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The Final Take.
It is rumored that “Ushers” was intended for a short story anthology that was ultimately canceled. I’m really glad that Hill went ahead and released this one as a stand-alone. Fingers crossed that Hill’s upcoming novel is on par with Ushers. This short story is currently free to read for Prime and Kindle Unlimited members. Buyer beware, the last line is a stinger!
Published in September 2024, Don’t Eat the Pie is a debut novel from author Monique Asher. Reminiscent of Rosemary’s Baby, this story delivers on so many tropes it is doubtful that anyone will not find something to like within its pages. It is not only tropes that Asher has gone to town with. Don’t Eat the Pie is also a mishmash of horror sub-genres that somehow works without being obvious. Southern gothic, supernatural, cult, body horror; it’s all served up here.
The Plot.
Newlyweds Sam and Ben’s idyllic honeymoon is cut short when Ben’s elderly mother, Nadine, suffers a fall. The couple and Sam’s teenage daughter, Emma, relocate to Ben’s childhood home to care for her.
Ben’s mother, lives on the exclusive Camillia Island. A secluded haven of wealth and privilege, accessible only by a creaky drawbridge. Things are smooth at first but both mother and daughter begin to notice some peculiar occurrences: mysterious men in pink shirts, overheard whispers, and a strange aftertaste from a seemingly innocent dessert.
As the days pass, the island’s tranquillity is shattered by increasingly bizarre events. The once-familiar landscape transforms transforms and the true identities of the island’s residents remain shrouded in secrecy. Sam and Emma find themselves entangled in a web of intrigue, questioning their own connection to the island’s dark past. As the stakes rise, Sam and Emma must uncover the truth about Camillia Island and its inhabitants before it’s too late.
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Highlights.
The way Asher has built this plot is genius. The abundance of tropes might leave readers assuming predictability. However, red herrings sprinkled throughout the chapters will leave you guessing but never quite certain who is friend and who is foe until the final chapters.
The way that Asher depicts the natural elements on Camillia Island is also worth mentioning as a highlight. Nature plays a big role in this plot and I confidently say that it is a character in its own right. It is not only the ubiquitous snakes and crows encroaching on the inhabited spaces that lend a sinister feeling. The descriptions of the ocean surrounding the island, the vines and flowers that grow around the houses and even the scents permeating the breeze all combine to create a single force that drives the plot to its conclusion.
Drawbacks.
Don’t Eat the Pie is told through the alternating points of view of Samantha and her daughter Emma. This has become a popular way to narrate a story and I understand that it gives the writer a way to reveal information to the reader while still keeping specific characters in the dark. The problem is that if the voices are not distinct enough it can become confusing to differentiate who is telling the story, even if this is specified at the beginning of each chapter. This was the problem I encountered; Sam and Emma are so similar that I spent a lot of time turning back to the chapter headings to check who was telling the story at each point.
The Final Take.
I loved this story.
Don’t Eat the Pie has something for every horror reader. A Southern gothic, supernatural, occult, familicide, body horror… I could go on.
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This was so close to the 5 out of 5 rating. It only missed out due to the alternating points of view causing some confusion because they were too similar.
After her 2017 debut novel, If We Were Villains, captivated readers and skyrocketed to Tik Tok fame readers have been holding their collective breath for anything from M. L. Rio. Seven years later we are presented with Graveyard Shift, another dark academic horror, though a novella this time around. The question is, was it worth the wait and why are readers split in their reactions to this story?
The Plot.
In the opening scene of Graveyard Shift readers encounter five people who often meet in a graveyard on smoke breaks from their various nocturnal jobs.
On the night in question, they discover a freshly dug hole near where they regularly gather. This sounds unremarkable until they realize that no one has been interred in this graveyard for over one hundred years. With the mystery revealed each character returns to their night, each eager to find the purpose of the hole.
Highlights.
Writing a novella that includes the viewpoints of five main characters is a considerable feat. Despite allowing only two chapters for each character in the entire story M. L. Rio successfully juggles these viewpoints without dropping any balls. From the driven editor-in-chief Edie Wu to the enigmatic Tuck. Each character possesses a distinct voice and plays a crucial role in unraveling the mystery. Whether it’s the insomniac ride-share driver Hannah or the bartender at Rocker Box. Each character stands apart, making this novella a compelling read.
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Another highlight of this novella is that this is not just another horror novel claiming to be dark academia because it’s set in or near a university. This story is soaked in the academic and the dark side of medical research.
Drawbacks.
The length of this story really went against M. L. Rio, there was so much expectation and hype around its release that when the 100-odd-page story was delivered there were many sighs of disappointment.
And it is not just reader expectation that caused the length to work against her. It must be said that the complexity of the story and the depth that Rio goes to to set up each character would have benefited from being rounded out by another, let’s say 200 pages. The last chapters seem rushed and the ending is ambiguous to say the least, but not in a good way.
I read this on a Kindle and was confused by the story ending at 85%, then slightly angry that the remaining pages were filled by a playlist, an excerpt of If We Were Villains and cocktail recipes??? Although I usually enjoy this type of extra content in fiction, I think Rio’s time might have been better spent writing a few more chapters.
The Final Take.
I approached Graveyard Shift with high expectations, but was ultimately disappointed. While the novel’s form, with its focus on multiple perspectives, initially drew me in, the abrupt and unsatisfying conclusion left me wanting more. Presenting this story as a novella did not do justice to the characters of the story. The mystery of the empty grave was intriguing, and following each character through their nocturnal routines was enjoyable. However, the rushed ending undermined the overall experience.
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