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Here we are once again with yet another installment of Monastery. I’ve said it before but with every part, the emotional stakes are rising in a tidal wave-like motion. We experience so many feelings as readers – excitement, fear, and heartbreak to name a few. Without any further ado, let’s take a dive (pun intended) and see where this chapter takes us, shall we?

Plot

We start with a nightmare sequence that’s something straight out of a horror movie. It’s revealed this is one of Henry’s recurring dreams (cheers to Cassandra for continuing the generational trauma chain). Our main group continues the investigation, still trying to get to the bottom of Albert’s murder. The only thing they find out is how much they don’t know, which is not helpful in the slightest.

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The love triangle between Nicole, Fred, and David continues as Nicole confides in David’s mother about whom she should choose. It’s an interesting representation of what both guys stand for and what they can offer Nicole. Although in love triangles the person who is stuck between two people is often hated by fans (The Vampire Diaries, anyone?), I think it’s done really well in Monastery. After all, it’s just a group of young people trying to figure out their feelings. Sadly, in this situation, someone was always going to get hurt. David does not take the rejection lightly, which made my heart ache for him. I do wonder if that’s the end of this storyline. 

Francis is taking his competition for the most unsettling character with Cassandra very seriously. It’s clear he has a lot of seething hatred for his family, including his nephews and I’m actually concerned for their safety. That’s not to say I’m not intrigued as to why he’s acting this way. His altercation with Fred, followed by Cassandra’s revelation that she doesn’t want Fred around is yet another tearjerking moment. It must be horrible to feel like you have no actual loving home, which puts a new layer on his relationship with Nicole.

No one could argue the ending is where the real turning point of the story is. Thomas’s interrogation of his older family members ends up in a tragic death, or so he thinks. Let’s just say that the neighborhood bully has become a lot more integral to the plot. Regardless, I can’t help feeling horrible for Thomas. Sure, he got a bit into his head trying to get answers and forgot to consider other people’s feelings. However, every mystery needs a character with a sense of justice, otherwise it would never be solved. I do hope the truth about the incident comes out sooner rather than later, for everyone’s sake.

Overall thoughts

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The fourth part of Monastery really toys with your emotions in the best way. If we don’t care for our characters, what’s the point in following the story? I felt genuine sadness for these people while reading and while this tonal shift at this point in the book is necessary, it doesn’t make it any less painful. I wish I could give them all a big hug and shield them. Alas, the mystery is nowhere near being solved and something tells me there’s a lot more heartbreak ahead…  5 out of 5 stars (5 / 5)

Read below for more insights from the author:

  1. It’s safe to say this was the most heart-wrenching episode of Monastery so far. Out of all the sad moments, which one was the hardest for you to write and why?

I love writing big, dramatic scenes – the bleaker, the better! So, I’m going to comment on the one that was harder to write from an operatic perspective, not an emotional one. Nana Beth’s reveal at the end was the hardest simply because all of the protagonists are there. When you have five kids at odds with each other, it’s difficult to ensure every one gets a word in and that you can still tell them apart. Additionally, I wanted to build up to the reveal in a way where you don’t see it coming straight away but it’s also not a curveball.

  • Do you have a favourite adult character to write for (excluding Albert and Cassandra) and if so, who? Similarly, is there an adult character that’s hard for you to write but you need to cause of the plot?

I adore Maggie. It’s no secret that the Keane family draws inspiration from my own, so Maggie of course borrows heavily from my mum. I love how she is essentially everyone’s mother figure, not just David’s – she is a boss lady whose only fear in life is not being able to protect the ones she loves.

On the flip side, I hate writing for George Turner – he is written to be disgusting, of course, and he is perfectly satirical of the kind of small-minded, middle-aged men you may find in less populated areas. But he just doesn’t flow out of me the way most characters do.

  • Lastly, can you share anything at this point in the story about Francis’s motivations for acting how he is? For me personally, he is currently the most unsettling character (which is saying a lot considering Cassandra is right there!).

Funny little segue here, as episode 5 (the midseason finale) is a massive one for both George and Francis, two of the villains in the plot. We find out a lot about what drives Francis and what makes him tick, and just how unsettling he can be. There is a lot of resentment pent up within young Francis, and when it finally erupts, you don’t want to be anywhere near it. As for what caused said resentment, there is an origin story a-comin’, and it’s the soapiest episode of Monastery yet. Stay tuned!

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Looking Glass Sound.

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Published in April 2023, Catriona Ward’s novel, Looking Glass Sound, continues her tradition of crafting intricate narratives that defy easy categorization. Like her acclaimed The House on Needless Street, Ward expertly weaves a web of clues and red herrings that will unravel with each reread. Is it an atmospheric horror, a twisted serial killer mystery, or the coming-of-age tale of a writer? The answer, as Ward skillfully demonstrates, is all three.

The Plot.

In 1989, sixteen-year-old Wilder Harlow, travels to the Maine coast with his mother and father, for the summer. His family has inherited a cottage on Whistler’s Bay, all hope that this will be a fresh start for him.

On the first day, Wilder meets Harper and Nat; teens who roam the town with little to no adult supervision. The two quickly become his guides to the town’s hidden secrets.

As they explore the bay’s eerie beauty, Wilder discovers a sinister undercurrent. A terrifying figure known as the “Dagger Man” has been terrorizing families; breaking into homes and photographing sleeping children at knifepoint. Meanwhile, a more chilling mystery unfolds: women have been vanishing from the town for over a decade.

Wilder and his new friends are drawn into the mysteries and the truth begins to unravel as they explore the hidden corners of the bay.

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This is only the first section of the book. What follows is Wilder’s experience through college, eventually returning to Whistler Bay as an elderly man. On his return things begin to twist and we find that everything we’ve been told is not strictly fact.

Highlights.

Catriona Ward is known for writing strong characters and here she does not disappoint. The novel introduces us to Wilder, Nat, and Harper as teenagers whose complex dynamics and relatable angst draw us in. Wilder’s college roommate, Sky, adds another layer of depth, offering a poignant exploration of queer coming-of-age.
While Ward’s intricate plot keeps us guessing, it also presents a minor challenge: the sheer number of twists and turns can sometimes blur the lines between characters: making it difficult to keep track of names and relationships. The introduction of two characters named Sky and Skye, in particular, can be confusing. Despite this, Ward’s character development remains consistently strong. Looking Glass Sound is a compelling exploration of human connection and the complexities of memory.

Drawbacks.

The overwhelming drawback for this novel was the structure. The first half of the novel follows a straightforward, linear timeline, allowing us to connect with Wilder and his friends on a personal level. However, the narrative takes a significant detour in the second half, adopting a complex frame-within-a-frame structure, or perhaps more accurately a book within a book… within a book. This shift can be disorienting, as readers are constantly pulled back and forth between different time periods and perspectives, often only to discover that certain events were not entirely as they seemed.

While this unconventional approach adds a layer of intrigue, it can also make the plot feel fragmented and difficult to follow. Ward’s decision to interrupt the narrative with explanations and asides can sometimes disrupt the pacing and immersion. While this choice may be intentional, it can also leave readers feeling lost and confused.

The Final Take.

This is not my first Catriona Ward novel, nor it will be my last. Ward writes stories that are built to confound the reader and make them question everything they’ve read. Looking Glass Sound pushes this a little too far. In my opinion is the weakest of her novels that I have read so far. In saying that I did enjoy the atmospheric horror of the introductory chapters and the dark academic feel of the college section. Following that I found myself becoming a little fed up with deciphering the plot.

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2.5 out of 5 stars (2.5 / 5)

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Smothermoss.

Smothermoss: A folk horror fairytale dragged through the mud.

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You can’t win against the mountain. The mountain always finds a way.”

Published in July 2024, Alisa Alering’s debut novel, Smothermoss, is a chilling blend of folk horror and dark fairytale. Though concise, this novel packs a powerful punch, its narrative dense with metaphor and a suffocating atmosphere. Not for the faint of heart, Smothermoss is a haunting exploration of the sinister lurking beneath the surface of the ordinary.

The Story.

Set in the rugged Appalachian Mountains of the 1980s, Smothermoss follows the lives of sisters, Sheila (17) and Angie (12). The two live with their mother and an elderly woman in a crumbling cottage in the forest. Both Sheila and Angie are the object of ridicule and bullying within their school community, the sisters cope with this bullying in starkly different ways. Sheila retreats into silence, avoiding conflict and longing for escape. Angie, meanwhile, immerses herself in a fantasy world, battling imaginary Russians and believing her handmade cards hold prophetic power.

When two women hikers are brutally murdered on the nearby Appalachian Trail, Sheila becomes more withdrawn and avoidant of the world, while Angie becomes convinced she’s destined to capture the killer. Little do they know; a far greater evil lurks in the forest.

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Highlights.

Alering’s masterful characterization of Sheila and Angie was the true gem of Smothermoss. Despite being told in the third person, the alternating chapters offer a bone deep immersion into each sister’s perspective. In recent fiction, author’s have not quite captured the authentic voice of a young character. However, Alering nails it. Angie’s pre-teen naivety shines through and never accidently matures past its 12-year-old existence. While Sheila’s late teenage anxieties and queer coming-of-age struggles are beautifully rendered.

Another highlight of this story is the lyrical prose. Smothermoss has a rhythm; it reads like poetry in places and in others could be mistaken for a children’s fable. Reading about the visceral and raw events and thoughts contained in Smothermoss, in such beautiful but simple language adds to the unsettling experience, and enjoyability, of reading this story

Drawbacks.

There were a couple of things that had me a little confused during this book. Several shorter chapters leave the sisters entirely behind and focus on rabbits and other forest animals. At first, I interpreted these to be metaphoric. The animals standing in for the killers point of view, or perhaps the murdered women. This book is so heavy with metaphor that this seems plausible, but I finished the book still questioning myself about this.

The other issue I found was that many of the subplots in this story are left unexplained or unfinished, turning to the last page with many questions that will never be answered. (Which has resulted in sleepless nights because I just want to know what exactly that rope is among other things!)

The Final Take.

At its core, this is the story of two sisters growing to understand each other and supporting each other through adversity.

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Beyond that, Smothermoss feels like a fairytale dragged through the mud.

The small size of this book (just over 250 pages) might lead people to think it is a quick or easy read. Don’t be fooled, as Shakespeare said, “though she be but little, she is fierce.” This is a complex story, with heavy themes and dark subtext.

I want, and hope, to read this story again because I know that there is much more to uncover here. The metaphors are dark and unnerving, the characters deep and moving, the natural imagery thick. I was not at all surprised to find out that Alering grew up in the Appalachian Mountains. Only someone familiar with the area could have described the people and place with so much heart.

4 out of 5 stars (4 / 5)

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The Unmothers.

“There was a horse that gave birth. There was a baby. There was a tree. There was a price.”

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Leslie J. Anderson’s debut novel, The Unmothers, is a chilling folk horror that delves into the darkest corners of motherhood. Published in August 2024, this slow-burn tale introduces a world where women’s rights are under threat.

With a subtle touch of Eldritch horror, Anderson weaves a narrative that explores the complex themes of motherhood, choice, and the lengths a woman might go to maintain control over her own body and destiny.

The Story.

Journalist Carolyn Marshall is sent to cover the story of a horse giving birth in the rural American town of Reaford. The attraction of this occurrence for a newspaper? That the baby is a healthy human baby boy. Marshall quickly debunks this story but decides to stay in town and follow her journalistic instinct to a bigger scoop.
Beneath the town’s quaint facade, Marshall uncovers a web of dark secrets. A drug epidemic is ravaging the community, immigrant workers are dying under mysterious circumstances, and the town’s powerful patriarch, John Daily, seems to hold everyone in his debt. As Marshall delves deeper into these troubling issues, she becomes increasingly entangled in the lives of the locals.
Through her interactions with the townspeople, Marshall hears whispers of a sinister presence lurking in the nearby woods. The locals share chilling tales of what a young woman in Reaford might do to terminate an unwanted pregnancy. As the story unfolds, Marshall must confront the terrifying truth about the town’s hidden past and the dangers that lurk within its borders.

Highlights.

I was never a young girl that oohed and aahed at the sight of a horse. After reading The Unmothers though, yeah, I get it. Anderson’s vivid descriptions of these magnificent creatures brought them to life in a way I’d never experienced before. The way she portrays their gentle nature, combined with their raw power and potential for brutality, is both captivating and unsettling. It’s a testament to Anderson’s skill as a writer that she can make even the most mundane details of these animals feel extraordinary.

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Drawbacks.

The Unmothers is a complex novel that delves into the interconnected events of a rural town, both past and present. In the first half of the book, the sheer number of characters and viewpoints can make it difficult to keep track of the plot. However, there are a few pivotal revelations that occur near the midpoint. This helps certain characters become more prominent and memorable, making the story easier to follow.

The Final Take.

The Unmothers is a haunting and unforgettable read that will leave you both terrified and deeply moved. Anderson’s masterful storytelling draws you into a world where the line between the natural and the supernatural is blurred.
The novel’s focus on horses, a subject I’m not particularly knowledgeable about, was a pleasant surprise. I was fascinated to learn about the unique characteristics of foals, including the tentacle-like growths on their hooves which had me Googling for proof.
This book is a must-read for fans of horror, folk tales, and thought-provoking fiction. It’s a powerful exploration of motherhood, choice, and the dark forces that can lurk beneath the surface of even the most seemingly idyllic communities.

4 out of 5 stars (4 / 5)

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