Here we are once again with yet another installment of Monastery. I’ve said it before but with every part, the emotional stakes are rising in a tidal wave-like motion. We experience so many feelings as readers – excitement, fear, and heartbreak to name a few. Without any further ado, let’s take a dive (pun intended) and see where this chapter takes us, shall we?
Plot
We start with a nightmare sequence that’s something straight out of a horror movie. It’s revealed this is one of Henry’s recurring dreams (cheers to Cassandra for continuing the generational trauma chain). Our main group continues the investigation, still trying to get to the bottom of Albert’s murder. The only thing they find out is how much they don’t know, which is not helpful in the slightest.
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The love triangle between Nicole, Fred, and David continues as Nicole confides in David’s mother about whom she should choose. It’s an interesting representation of what both guys stand for and what they can offer Nicole. Although in love triangles the person who is stuck between two people is often hated by fans (The Vampire Diaries, anyone?), I think it’s done really well in Monastery. After all, it’s just a group of young people trying to figure out their feelings. Sadly, in this situation, someone was always going to get hurt. David does not take the rejection lightly, which made my heart ache for him. I do wonder if that’s the end of this storyline.
Francis is taking his competition for the most unsettling character with Cassandra very seriously. It’s clear he has a lot of seething hatred for his family, including his nephews and I’m actually concerned for their safety. That’s not to say I’m not intrigued as to why he’s acting this way. His altercation with Fred, followed by Cassandra’s revelation that she doesn’t want Fred around is yet another tearjerking moment. It must be horrible to feel like you have no actual loving home, which puts a new layer on his relationship with Nicole.
No one could argue the ending is where the real turning point of the story is. Thomas’s interrogation of his older family members ends up in a tragic death, or so he thinks. Let’s just say that the neighborhood bully has become a lot more integral to the plot. Regardless, I can’t help feeling horrible for Thomas. Sure, he got a bit into his head trying to get answers and forgot to consider other people’s feelings. However, every mystery needs a character with a sense of justice, otherwise it would never be solved. I do hope the truth about the incident comes out sooner rather than later, for everyone’s sake.
Overall thoughts
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The fourth part of Monastery really toys with your emotions in the best way. If we don’t care for our characters, what’s the point in following the story? I felt genuine sadness for these people while reading and while this tonal shift at this point in the book is necessary, it doesn’t make it any less painful. I wish I could give them all a big hug and shield them. Alas, the mystery is nowhere near being solved and something tells me there’s a lot more heartbreak ahead…
(5 / 5)
Read below for more insights from the author:
It’s safe to say this was the most heart-wrenching episode of Monastery so far. Out of all the sad moments, which one was the hardest for you to write and why?
I love writing big, dramatic scenes – the bleaker, the better! So, I’m going to comment on the one that was harder to write from an operatic perspective, not an emotional one. Nana Beth’s reveal at the end was the hardest simply because all of the protagonists are there. When you have five kids at odds with each other, it’s difficult to ensure every one gets a word in and that you can still tell them apart. Additionally, I wanted to build up to the reveal in a way where you don’t see it coming straight away but it’s also not a curveball.
Do you have a favourite adult character to write for (excluding Albert and Cassandra) and if so, who? Similarly, is there an adult character that’s hard for you to write but you need to cause of the plot?
I adore Maggie. It’s no secret that the Keane family draws inspiration from my own, so Maggie of course borrows heavily from my mum. I love how she is essentially everyone’s mother figure, not just David’s – she is a boss lady whose only fear in life is not being able to protect the ones she loves.
On the flip side, I hate writing for George Turner – he is written to be disgusting, of course, and he is perfectly satirical of the kind of small-minded, middle-aged men you may find in less populated areas. But he just doesn’t flow out of me the way most characters do.
Lastly, can you share anything at this point in the story about Francis’s motivations for acting how he is? For me personally, he is currently the most unsettling character (which is saying a lot considering Cassandra is right there!).
Funny little segue here, as episode 5 (the midseason finale) is a massive one for both George and Francis, two of the villains in the plot. We find out a lot about what drives Francis and what makes him tick, and just how unsettling he can be. There is a lot of resentment pent up within young Francis, and when it finally erupts, you don’t want to be anywhere near it. As for what caused said resentment, there is an origin story a-comin’, and it’s the soapiest episode of Monastery yet. Stay tuned!
Part detective story, part meditation on death and the grim reaper, Ushers is Joe Hill’s latest release and second stand-alone short story in as many years. Released in November 2024, this thirty-page tale delves into the eerie realm of near-death experiences, exploring the blurred lines between life and death and the haunting aftermath of miraculous escapes.
The Plot.
Ushers is divided into two interviews. In the first, we meet with special agents John Oates and Daryl Duvall. The two interview a young man, Martin Lorensen, who seems to be one lucky kid. You see Martin has avoided death not once, but twice. The derailment of Mohawk 118 is central to their investigation; Martin had a ticket but didn’t get on the train. The other was a school shooting at Kennedy High School; Martin didn’t attend school that day. The special agents question whether this luck is culpability. Is Martin responsible for these events and the lives that were lost? Martin says no, but it is soon revealed that he knows a little more than he is letting on.
Highlights.
Joe Hill knows his way around a short story. His pacing and timing are second to none. There wasn’t a moment during Ushers that I wasn’t captivated by what was unfolding. This is not the first time that Hill has dealt with themes of death. We’ve met Ig Perrish in Horns and Judas Coyne in Heart-Shaped Box just to name two. This is though the first time that Hill has considered the inevitability of death and he has handled this weighty theme so beautifully. One of the quotes I pulled from this short story is going to stay with me for a long time. “Be a mammal. Eat as much fresh fruit as you can. Send some time in the trees. Hug the people you love. Accept that death is as natural as the rest of life.” (Hill, Ushers) Good advice for us all.
Drawbacks.
I’m a stickler for playing by the rules and weighing up the good and bad of everything. But I’m going against my greater instincts here and telling you there were no drawbacks in this short story. Haters come at me, but I can’t find anything to complain about.
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The Final Take.
It is rumored that “Ushers” was intended for a short story anthology that was ultimately canceled. I’m really glad that Hill went ahead and released this one as a stand-alone. Fingers crossed that Hill’s upcoming novel is on par with Ushers. This short story is currently free to read for Prime and Kindle Unlimited members. Buyer beware, the last line is a stinger!
Published in September 2024, Don’t Eat the Pie is a debut novel from author Monique Asher. Reminiscent of Rosemary’s Baby, this story delivers on so many tropes it is doubtful that anyone will not find something to like within its pages. It is not only tropes that Asher has gone to town with. Don’t Eat the Pie is also a mishmash of horror sub-genres that somehow works without being obvious. Southern gothic, supernatural, cult, body horror; it’s all served up here.
The Plot.
Newlyweds Sam and Ben’s idyllic honeymoon is cut short when Ben’s elderly mother, Nadine, suffers a fall. The couple and Sam’s teenage daughter, Emma, relocate to Ben’s childhood home to care for her.
Ben’s mother, lives on the exclusive Camillia Island. A secluded haven of wealth and privilege, accessible only by a creaky drawbridge. Things are smooth at first but both mother and daughter begin to notice some peculiar occurrences: mysterious men in pink shirts, overheard whispers, and a strange aftertaste from a seemingly innocent dessert.
As the days pass, the island’s tranquillity is shattered by increasingly bizarre events. The once-familiar landscape transforms transforms and the true identities of the island’s residents remain shrouded in secrecy. Sam and Emma find themselves entangled in a web of intrigue, questioning their own connection to the island’s dark past. As the stakes rise, Sam and Emma must uncover the truth about Camillia Island and its inhabitants before it’s too late.
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Highlights.
The way Asher has built this plot is genius. The abundance of tropes might leave readers assuming predictability. However, red herrings sprinkled throughout the chapters will leave you guessing but never quite certain who is friend and who is foe until the final chapters.
The way that Asher depicts the natural elements on Camillia Island is also worth mentioning as a highlight. Nature plays a big role in this plot and I confidently say that it is a character in its own right. It is not only the ubiquitous snakes and crows encroaching on the inhabited spaces that lend a sinister feeling. The descriptions of the ocean surrounding the island, the vines and flowers that grow around the houses and even the scents permeating the breeze all combine to create a single force that drives the plot to its conclusion.
Drawbacks.
Don’t Eat the Pie is told through the alternating points of view of Samantha and her daughter Emma. This has become a popular way to narrate a story and I understand that it gives the writer a way to reveal information to the reader while still keeping specific characters in the dark. The problem is that if the voices are not distinct enough it can become confusing to differentiate who is telling the story, even if this is specified at the beginning of each chapter. This was the problem I encountered; Sam and Emma are so similar that I spent a lot of time turning back to the chapter headings to check who was telling the story at each point.
The Final Take.
I loved this story.
Don’t Eat the Pie has something for every horror reader. A Southern gothic, supernatural, occult, familicide, body horror… I could go on.
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This was so close to the 5 out of 5 rating. It only missed out due to the alternating points of view causing some confusion because they were too similar.
After her 2017 debut novel, If We Were Villains, captivated readers and skyrocketed to Tik Tok fame readers have been holding their collective breath for anything from M. L. Rio. Seven years later we are presented with Graveyard Shift, another dark academic horror, though a novella this time around. The question is, was it worth the wait and why are readers split in their reactions to this story?
The Plot.
In the opening scene of Graveyard Shift readers encounter five people who often meet in a graveyard on smoke breaks from their various nocturnal jobs.
On the night in question, they discover a freshly dug hole near where they regularly gather. This sounds unremarkable until they realize that no one has been interred in this graveyard for over one hundred years. With the mystery revealed each character returns to their night, each eager to find the purpose of the hole.
Highlights.
Writing a novella that includes the viewpoints of five main characters is a considerable feat. Despite allowing only two chapters for each character in the entire story M. L. Rio successfully juggles these viewpoints without dropping any balls. From the driven editor-in-chief Edie Wu to the enigmatic Tuck. Each character possesses a distinct voice and plays a crucial role in unraveling the mystery. Whether it’s the insomniac ride-share driver Hannah or the bartender at Rocker Box. Each character stands apart, making this novella a compelling read.
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Another highlight of this novella is that this is not just another horror novel claiming to be dark academia because it’s set in or near a university. This story is soaked in the academic and the dark side of medical research.
Drawbacks.
The length of this story really went against M. L. Rio, there was so much expectation and hype around its release that when the 100-odd-page story was delivered there were many sighs of disappointment.
And it is not just reader expectation that caused the length to work against her. It must be said that the complexity of the story and the depth that Rio goes to to set up each character would have benefited from being rounded out by another, let’s say 200 pages. The last chapters seem rushed and the ending is ambiguous to say the least, but not in a good way.
I read this on a Kindle and was confused by the story ending at 85%, then slightly angry that the remaining pages were filled by a playlist, an excerpt of If We Were Villains and cocktail recipes??? Although I usually enjoy this type of extra content in fiction, I think Rio’s time might have been better spent writing a few more chapters.
The Final Take.
I approached Graveyard Shift with high expectations, but was ultimately disappointed. While the novel’s form, with its focus on multiple perspectives, initially drew me in, the abrupt and unsatisfying conclusion left me wanting more. Presenting this story as a novella did not do justice to the characters of the story. The mystery of the empty grave was intriguing, and following each character through their nocturnal routines was enjoyable. However, the rushed ending undermined the overall experience.
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