Vermis I: Lost Dungeons and Forbidden Woods, a Novel Review
Vermis I: Lost Dungeons and Forbidden Woods is a graphic novel by Plastiboo. The team behind the work includes Plastiboo as the artist, Hollow Press as the publisher, Michele Nitri as the editor, Marco Cirillo Pedri as the graphic designer, and a mysterious E.R. as the English proofreader. While I found the book available across outlets, I would recommend going directly to Hollow Press as I am unsure of the reliability of these other options.
Which flesh is your flesh? Come traveler and pick between several distinct classes to explore the bleak world of Vermis. Catastrophe and calamity dictate the lands you travel to, warring to break all living here. Venture forth, but be forewarned, hope remains a distant memory.
What I Love About Vermis I
The premise of this book was that of “an official guide of a game that doesn’t exist.” I was reminded of countless nights studying such books for every drop of lore I could. It paid passionate respect to these guides, bringing to life a retro game inspired by Dark Souls but entirely its own. The concept creates an interesting and interactive fiction, requiring readers to build an understanding of mechanics and gameplay that doesn’t actually exist.
The art style evoked a green-saturated pixel-apocalypse in a fantasy setting. This premise likely evoked your interest or turned you away. Vermis I committed to this style, so that desire remained an important part of your enjoyment.
When I learned of the Infant Seeker class, I had to admit a curiosity. The “classes” are unique, painting a perspective and “playstyle” that fleshes out this imagined world. To be clear, this isn’t a “choose your own adventure” experience. The book is informative, with some options sprinkled in. However, these options are purposefully limited, revealing little for possible interpretations.
While Vermis I was not a large graphic novel, I couldn’t put it down. On the first day I held it in my hands, I finished it. There were sections and natural break points to help pace the material, but it kept me engaged throughout.
Vermis I evoked a bleak horror all too familiar to those of the Dark Souls fandom. While I couldn’t call this a Soulslike, as it doesn’t provide any mechanics associated with the genre, Vermis I follows the story trends and themes closely.
Tired Tropes and Considerations
Aside from the bleak world, there’s little to discuss in triggers and tropes. It’s worth mentioning that infants were considered a delicacy to witches in this world, but that’s not given much time or focus.
The biggest consideration was the purchasing process. It was largely seamless through PayPal, but American audiences would need some third party to convert payment. Wait time lingered between 15 to 45 days with no notifications to alleviate worries. I didn’t blame this experience on Hollow Press, but it was certainly a drawback.
For transparency, my purchase arrived ahead of the latest mark, ranging within 20 days. There was also an additional purchase option for a price increase that might have resulted in notifications.
What I Dislike About Vermis I
Readability remained my only major concern and issue throughout the text. This issue stemmed from creative decisions and art style choices that make reading certain sections difficult. The retro art also left some room for misinterpretation. Vermis I’s title represented this issue perfectly. Yes, it’s artistic and haunting but challenging to read.
Vermis I appealed to a rather specific niche. It had room to further develop this informative aspect but reached its intended goal in an arena of limited competition. In fact, the specifics made Vermis I the only such contestant in its arena. Outside this niche, there’s retro gaming art and a heavy influence of Dark Souls to appeal further. Regardless, it’s a specific experience that either sounds interesting or unappealing.
Though enjoyable, this wasn’t a perfect parallel to reading those official guides. Vermis I provided a more obtuse experience compared to other such books. However, this might better represent the Dark Souls influence. Vermis I’s “game” would be a linear experience with replay value. It’s a funny way of looking at the content, but that’s the premise one buys into.
As unique as this graphic novel turned out to be, and how enjoyable the content remained, Vermis I left much room to further explore a dynamic it partly founded. I do hope Vermis II expanded on the material as either a companion piece or an original setting.
Final Thoughts
Vermis I: Lost Dungeons and Forbidden Woods delivered a unique graphic novel experience. Part guidebook and adventure novel with sprinkles of Dark Souls influence, this graphic novel provided an enjoyable and haunting world that evoked the imagination. While it felt condensed for a sole project, it catered to a focused niche while creating a market.
(3.5 / 5)
Book Reviews
Review: Don’t Eat the Pie, Monique Asher’s delicious trope fest.
“Real monsters are people, and I’ve seen them”
Published in September 2024, Don’t Eat the Pie is a debut novel from author Monique Asher. Reminiscent of Rosemary’s Baby, this story delivers on so many tropes it is doubtful that anyone will not find something to like within its pages. It is not only tropes that Asher has gone to town with. Don’t Eat the Pie is also a mishmash of horror sub-genres that somehow works without being obvious. Southern gothic, supernatural, cult, body horror; it’s all served up here.
The Plot.
Newlyweds Sam and Ben’s idyllic honeymoon is cut short when Ben’s elderly mother, Nadine, suffers a fall. The couple and Sam’s teenage daughter, Emma, relocate to Ben’s childhood home to care for her.
Ben’s mother, lives on the exclusive Camillia Island. A secluded haven of wealth and privilege, accessible only by a creaky drawbridge. Things are smooth at first but both mother and daughter begin to notice some peculiar occurrences: mysterious men in pink shirts, overheard whispers, and a strange aftertaste from a seemingly innocent dessert.
As the days pass, the island’s tranquillity is shattered by increasingly bizarre events. The once-familiar landscape transforms transforms and the true identities of the island’s residents remain shrouded in secrecy. Sam and Emma find themselves entangled in a web of intrigue, questioning their own connection to the island’s dark past. As the stakes rise, Sam and Emma must uncover the truth about Camillia Island and its inhabitants before it’s too late.
Highlights.
The way Asher has built this plot is genius. The abundance of tropes might leave readers assuming predictability. However, red herrings sprinkled throughout the chapters will leave you guessing but never quite certain who is friend and who is foe until the final chapters.
The way that Asher depicts the natural elements on Camillia Island is also worth mentioning as a highlight. Nature plays a big role in this plot and I confidently say that it is a character in its own right. It is not only the ubiquitous snakes and crows encroaching on the inhabited spaces that lend a sinister feeling. The descriptions of the ocean surrounding the island, the vines and flowers that grow around the houses and even the scents permeating the breeze all combine to create a single force that drives the plot to its conclusion.
Drawbacks.
Don’t Eat the Pie is told through the alternating points of view of Samantha and her daughter Emma. This has become a popular way to narrate a story and I understand that it gives the writer a way to reveal information to the reader while still keeping specific characters in the dark. The problem is that if the voices are not distinct enough it can become confusing to differentiate who is telling the story, even if this is specified at the beginning of each chapter. This was the problem I encountered; Sam and Emma are so similar that I spent a lot of time turning back to the chapter headings to check who was telling the story at each point.
The Final Take.
I loved this story.
Don’t Eat the Pie has something for every horror reader. A Southern gothic, supernatural, occult, familicide, body horror… I could go on.
This was so close to the 5 out of 5 rating. It only missed out due to the alternating points of view causing some confusion because they were too similar.
(4.5 / 5)
After her 2017 debut novel, If We Were Villains, captivated readers and skyrocketed to Tik Tok fame readers have been holding their collective breath for anything from M. L. Rio. Seven years later we are presented with Graveyard Shift, another dark academic horror, though a novella this time around. The question is, was it worth the wait and why are readers split in their reactions to this story?
The Plot.
In the opening scene of Graveyard Shift readers encounter five people who often meet in a graveyard on smoke breaks from their various nocturnal jobs.
On the night in question, they discover a freshly dug hole near where they regularly gather. This sounds unremarkable until they realize that no one has been interred in this graveyard for over one hundred years. With the mystery revealed each character returns to their night, each eager to find the purpose of the hole.
Highlights.
Writing a novella that includes the viewpoints of five main characters is a considerable feat. Despite allowing only two chapters for each character in the entire story M. L. Rio successfully juggles these viewpoints without dropping any balls. From the driven editor-in-chief Edie Wu to the enigmatic Tuck. Each character possesses a distinct voice and plays a crucial role in unraveling the mystery. Whether it’s the insomniac ride-share driver Hannah or the bartender at Rocker Box. Each character stands apart, making this novella a compelling read.
Another highlight of this novella is that this is not just another horror novel claiming to be dark academia because it’s set in or near a university. This story is soaked in the academic and the dark side of medical research.
Drawbacks.
The length of this story really went against M. L. Rio, there was so much expectation and hype around its release that when the 100-odd-page story was delivered there were many sighs of disappointment.
And it is not just reader expectation that caused the length to work against her. It must be said that the complexity of the story and the depth that Rio goes to to set up each character would have benefited from being rounded out by another, let’s say 200 pages. The last chapters seem rushed and the ending is ambiguous to say the least, but not in a good way.
I read this on a Kindle and was confused by the story ending at 85%, then slightly angry that the remaining pages were filled by a playlist, an excerpt of If We Were Villains and cocktail recipes??? Although I usually enjoy this type of extra content in fiction, I think Rio’s time might have been better spent writing a few more chapters.
The Final Take.
I approached Graveyard Shift with high expectations, but was ultimately disappointed. While the novel’s form, with its focus on multiple perspectives, initially drew me in, the abrupt and unsatisfying conclusion left me wanting more. Presenting this story as a novella did not do justice to the characters of the story. The mystery of the empty grave was intriguing, and following each character through their nocturnal routines was enjoyable. However, the rushed ending undermined the overall experience.
(2 / 5)
You can’t beat a good old haunted house story. One of the classic tropes of the genre, it allows for some old-school spooks while providing some character development. Now dress it up in a new generation suit and you get something completely different. How does Haven measure up as an addition to the trope? Let’s find out!
Plot
We start the story with a family of four headed on a month-long holiday at a distant relative’s mansion. We have Jeff, the ever-so-average husband, Jenna, the thriller-reading health nut wife. The kids are JJ, the loner gamer son with a passion for swimming, and Jessie, the social media addict with severe insecurities.
I would say that personally, their dynamic was the most interesting and promising part of the novel. It’s clear from the get-go that Jeff and Jenna are trying against all odds to preserve the American Dream. Except right away there is resentment bubbling underneath. Jeff is a pretentious asshole who thinks Jenna’s taste in books is inferior (as a domestic thriller fan I take great offence). Jenna wishes for him to have more career ambition so she can afford the lifestyle she wants. Safe to say there is barely any intimacy between the couple.
When it comes to the kids, both JJ and Jessie feel like an extension of the worst traits of their parents. Jessie’s entire world is social media and her following. For JJ, he is arguably the character with the least development. His main traits are that he hates his family and can’t wait to move out. Oh, and the food.
This is something that I found more discomforting than the horror in the book. Both of the kids have severe food issues, with JJ overeating to the point of obesity while Jessie starves herself and has developed bulimia from the pressure to stay ‘perfect’. The horrifying thing is that neither of the parents notice these things about their kids or if they do, they choose to ignore it.
The haunting in this story is very family-focused. Missing things, Jenna’s harassment, Jeff’s seduction – all these things seem to be specifically catered to break whatever was left of this family unit. Not that it takes much to push them over the edge. This begs the question that whoever is haunting this place is methodical and feeds off their misery.
Gussie’s excerpts break up the pace but personally, I wasn’t as engaged with them as I was with the main story. That being said, I understand its necessity in order to develop the lore.
Writing style
I would say one of my biggest gripes with Haven is not the story itself but rather the way it’s told. The writing style seems like it was trying to adapt to the new times and be tongue-in-cheek. This has varying degrees of success, with some genuinely good nuggets of writing scattered. However, some of it falls flat, especially in the beginning, with the characters doubling down on the points we already knew through the narrative.
Overall thoughts
Haven is a good effort at a haunted house story where there are scarier things than ghosts. It does a good job exploring family dynamics and dealing with negative emotions. The setting is also a strong point of the novel, the house and the forest surrounding it being quite immersive.
As I mentioned, for me the main negative was a bit too try-hard type of writing, although it got better as the book went on. I found the end to be a bit too soft for my liking but it fits with the story. Overall I would still recommend.
(3 / 5)
